Thesis statement

4. All citizens should be required by law to vote.

Thesis statement: We are living in the democratic society, everyone have rights to vote. At the same time, 

government will know what people want, move country forward.

5. All forms of government welfare should be abolished.

Thesis statement: Government put too much money on welfare. For instance, farmer, old people, and soldier. 

6.Both parents should assume equal responsibility in raising a child. 

Thesis statement: Parents should give same love to their child. If child grow up with only mother or father, 

they probably will go crime, or sick when they become adult. 

7 Participating in tema sports helps to develop good character.

Thesis statement: Tema sports is really important for everyone. Joining the team work can cultivate your 

responsibility and your team spirit. 

15 Most study-abroad programs should be renamed" party abroad": they are a waste of time and money.

Thesis statement: Some of parents like to sant their kids abroad, but most of them are waste their money. 

For example, no study for them. Playing computer game and smoking all the time. 

^ Pathos Ethos Logos ^

Dear Mr. GrandI am a student form Squaw Valley Academy. We are all come from different country and we all have different culture. May i describe to you my thoughts?  Let's think carefully about the rule of our school. We cannot have a study group during the night study hall even for honor roll students. I mean if the students who are in the honor roll, they are good student. School should trust them. For me, I really love to study. I know most of students love study too. Sometimes we need study with others. Then we can help each others. At the same time, we are all can get good grade. I know the situation now is we got a lot of Chinese students in the school. Many of them including me, we are english leaner. So i know some people doen't want to put offer to study. School just give the punishment. If school do the punishment all the time, people start to not care about the rule of the school. They probably got used to it. Giving more freedom to students probably will make school better in the future. We have almost 80 percent of students are Chinese here, if we solve their problem then we solve all the problem. 

Pathos Ethos Logod

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4tTugqBkJU
Good explanation

Pathos: Definition( When you persuade someone to do something by using emotional arguments)
            Example : One driver drink a lot and didn't wear seatbelt when he is driving. Then he got injured so badly. In the radio there shows the picture that how he looks after accident. Appeal people that cannot drive after drive, and drive without seatbelt.  I think this is the one that make you feel bad for the person who drive after drunk.

Ethos: Definition( Gain the audience's support for the writer's argument. Make audience's trust you)
           Example: There is a boy he want to eat pizza for dinner, but his mother have the money. So he have to make his mother order the pizza for him. Then he use the Ethos. He said" mom i know you are really tired today. I have a good idea that we can order pizza tonight. At the same time, I have coupon for the pizza restaurant." Then his mom might think, right i am not start to cook dinner yet. We can order pizza, then i can take a rest and my son will happy. He will study harder probably.

Logos: ( Evidence)

Education

Each of us had different talent. We have to find out how can we use those talent correctly. If you are good on math, then you should spend lots of time studying mathematics to become a successful students. Education is very important for all the teenager people. We have to study, get more knowledge in your brain. Finally get college degree, then having a nice job. At the same time, we are not only learn the knowledge from the books. We also went to field trip to study. The result of your study is important, but you are enjoy the process, and you actually learn a lot when you are study. But we cannot only study math, english or biology. We have to do some sports or find something that you interest to do.

When i doing something wrong, i will try to find out where i am wrong. If i cannot find my mistake i will aks other people to point out where i wrong, then i will try to fix my mistake and do it better next time.

My intelligent is i always listen to teacher, do my best on education. I like to help others.

MY future

They told me I am good at researcher and creator. They say I am independent and self-motivated person. The good job for me are being project engineer, sales forecasting and geologist.  At the same time, I will good at create some things. Good on art, music and writing. I agree with half of the results. I will go to the good university, then i will choose accounting for my major class in the university. So probably I will become a business women. Working at corporation everyday, or i can going to help my dad company after I graduate form the university. I am sure that i will study much harder than my high school year. I also want to learn another language except Chinese or english. Learning another language will be a good way to communicate with other people. My future will be good. I always believe that. 

Lying

    Lying is not always harmful. Lying is what we wish to be. We are lying to make us looks better. Stranger will lie 3 times when they met people first time in 10 minutes. Lying has value. There is a good liar and bad liar. Good liar will make good value, which benefit them a lot.

   Yes. My best friends lied to me before. I really trust her before the things happen. She were my T-shirt without ask me. When I find out, she just say, she washed for me. Then second day, some of my other friends told me that she wear my T-shirt to the dance party last night. When I try to talk to her, she doesn’t want to talk to me. Lying is really bad. After that I don't want to trust her anymore. I feel really bad when I know she is lie to me. As far as I think lying can see the personal character pretty well.      Sometimes lying is might be justified, most of time we should be integrity.

I always try to be honest. I cannot tell I never lied before. I want to be honest that I had lie to my mom when I want to buy a new cell phone. The most of time, I am doing the right things.