Thesis statement

4. All citizens should be required by law to vote.

Thesis statement: We are living in the democratic society, everyone have rights to vote. At the same time, 

government will know what people want, move country forward.

5. All forms of government welfare should be abolished.

Thesis statement: Government put too much money on welfare. For instance, farmer, old people, and soldier. 

6.Both parents should assume equal responsibility in raising a child. 

Thesis statement: Parents should give same love to their child. If child grow up with only mother or father, 

they probably will go crime, or sick when they become adult. 

7 Participating in tema sports helps to develop good character.

Thesis statement: Tema sports is really important for everyone. Joining the team work can cultivate your 

responsibility and your team spirit. 

15 Most study-abroad programs should be renamed" party abroad": they are a waste of time and money.

Thesis statement: Some of parents like to sant their kids abroad, but most of them are waste their money. 

For example, no study for them. Playing computer game and smoking all the time. 

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Dear Mr. GrandI am a student form Squaw Valley Academy. We are all come from different country and we all have different culture. May i describe to you my thoughts?  Let's think carefully about the rule of our school. We cannot have a study group during the night study hall even for honor roll students. I mean if the students who are in the honor roll, they are good student. School should trust them. For me, I really love to study. I know most of students love study too. Sometimes we need study with others. Then we can help each others. At the same time, we are all can get good grade. I know the situation now is we got a lot of Chinese students in the school. Many of them including me, we are english leaner. So i know some people doen't want to put offer to study. School just give the punishment. If school do the punishment all the time, people start to not care about the rule of the school. They probably got used to it. Giving more freedom to students probably will make school better in the future. We have almost 80 percent of students are Chinese here, if we solve their problem then we solve all the problem.